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Delphinios
03-31-2003, 02:07 PM
Chapter Nine
The Art of Persuasion

"We've gotta get out of here, Helena." Dinah was beginning to get desperate. They were locked in a jail cell in their friend's mind, while Barbara slowly died in the real world. Worst of all, Helena was acting as if she didn't care. The teenager was getting desperate. She couldn't lose Barbara so soon after losing her own mother. She couldn't do it, and not even Helena was going to stand in her way. "Will you just get over yourself?" Dinah demanded, finally. "So, she doesn't know who you are? Big deal. Get over it. You know Barbara loves you, and if you don't know that....then you're more conceited and self involved than I thought. God, Helena, Barbara is DYING. You can't just pout like a four year old and then come over tomorrow and pretend nothing happened. There will be NO tomorrow for her! She's dying...and YOU are the one killing her!"

Helena's eyes flashed a feline blue as she turned to the young woman. She looked ready to blow up at any moment, her fist clenched at her side.

Dinah didn't back down. "Go ahead. Hit me. Beat me up. I won't even fight back." The blonde held Helena's gaze without wavering. "I'm not going to let her die, Helena. I don't care what happens...I'm not going to let her die. You're either with me...or you're just one more thing I have to overcome to get out of this place and find her. I don't care which it is. You just better decide soon. Before its too late for either of us to save her."

"You can't save her, Dinah. Don't you get it?" Helena sighed and sat back down on the bench which ran the length of the cell wall. "She doesn't want to go back. Would you? You saw her last night on that rooftop. She was good...better than I ever thought she was, and she was having fun. She got back everything she lost, so she doesn't need us anymore. She doesn't want to go back to reality and that chair. I'm not sure I'd want to either. Nothing we say or do is going to make any difference. She's gone."

"No." Dinah shook her head furiously. "She's not gone. It's those machines. That's not Barbara. We just need to get through to her, talk to her..."

"You'll only be wasting your breath. Oracle doesn't exist here. It's just Batgirl, and Batgirl wants nothing to do with either of us."

Dinah glared at the woman, her eyes afire with hatred. "Fine. You know what, I can do it without you. You can just sit here and rot in this cell for all I care. I'm getting out...and I'm going to find her! You know why? Because I LOVE her, and I NEED her, and I'm not going to give her up without a fight." Her eyes left Helena to settle on a ring of keys along the wall, as if of their own volition they soared across the room into her hand. "I'm leaving, and you can go straight to Hell."

In a corner of the hallway, a tiny camera recorded the cat fight. At the end of the cable, seated before a closed circuit television, a pretty red head looked troubled.

"Shouldn't we stop her?" The police officer asked.

"No." Barbara whispered. "No, Jason...let her leave. I don't think she's dangerous. Just...make sure you keep the brunette here. She worries me." She stood up from her chair, dusting off her jeans. "In fact, Officer Bard, don't worry about that paperwork. I won't be pressing charges. Just hold Helena for the maximum 24 hours and let her go. By then, I think I'll have this thing dealt with accordingly." Right now, she had to find that girl and find out exactly what she had to say about this other world.

***

Dinah had looked everywhere for Barbara and was beginning to lose hope. In a fit of inspiration, or perhaps more likely, desperation, she'd come to the clocktower. She wasn't surprised to find that their home and headquarters did not lay beyond the clockface. With a heavy hearted sigh, she sat down on the balcony and stared out at a city that looked very much the same as hers, but was so incredibly different.

"I think you wanted to talk to me."

Dinah jumped and turned at the sound of that familiar voice. "Barbara?" She asked in surprise. "Er...Batgirl?"

The figure behind the cowl smiled in an almost maternal way and pulled free her mask. "Let's stick with Barbara. Is this seat taken, or can I sit here?"

"Oh...uh...yeah...I mean no...I mean, please sit down." Dinah stuttered.

Barbara chuckled, looking out over the same view which had held Dinah transfixed. "This is one of my favorite places in the city. You can see everything from here. When I first became Batgirl, this is the place I visited when I needed to think. I always told myself that if I ever had a 'Batcave' of my own, it wouldn't be underground...it would be up in the clouds where you can see the entire city."

Dinah tucked a lock of hair behind her ear and gave Barbara a secret little smile. "This is where our 'lair' is. Here. In the clocktower. Just beyond that clock. You have all kinds of computers, and you know everything. Every superhero in the world depends on you for information. I don't know what they'll do if you don't come home."

"You realize I find this very hard to swallow." Barbara asked, her voice was soft, perhaps a little teasing, but not the hard edged tone she used with Helena. "This whole idea, that my world is a dream and in your world, the real world, I'm disabled...."

"You're not though. You have this machine you made that can help you walk...and you fight without legs just fine. You're not disabled, you just don't high kick anymore. Not a big deal, really." Dinah smiled, hoping against hope she was somehow getting through to her.

"How do I know your world isn't the dream, Dinah? How do I know you're not just trying to tempt me into some trap that's going to put my life in danger?"

Dinah looked hurt at that suggestion. "I would never do that to you, Barbara. Ever. You're the only person I've got in the whole world. You're it. If I lose you, I'm alone."

"What about 'Huntress?' " Barbara rolled her eyes at the use of that silly name.

"Helena didn't want me around in the first place. I know she likes me, but I don't think she loves me like you do."

"I want to believe you, Dinah. I really do. But, there's no proof. It's your word, against a lifetime of memories...none of which contain you or Helena. Wouldn't I remember something?"

"I don't know." Dinah whispered, suddenly realizing that she was losing her fight. "I mean, there were these nanobots that got inside your head and made you sick...they made a detective kill people at my school. They could make you forget."

"Maybe. Or, maybe, you made this up so that I'd help you." Barbara smiled slightly, patting her shoulder. "You don't have anywhere to go, do you? Listen...I'm not making any promises, but I've got a really comfortable couch in my apartment and an office that I'm not really using. You could decorate it anyway you want."

Dinah stared at her in silence for a moment. "You're not completely gone, are you, Barbara? What you just said...sounds like Oracle, not Batgirl. You're so close to remembering. I know it."

"Come on, we can go home and talk about this over dinner."

"You don't have time for dinner, Batgirl."

Barbara spun towards the voice, her body tensed for a fight. "Oh, it's YOU." Silhouetted against the night stood a figure dressed in black, her coat streaming behind her. For a moment, Barbara thought of her mentor...but pushed Batman from her mind. "She's coming with me, Huntress."

"No." Helena declared in a steady voice. "YOU are coming with ME. We're going home."

Chapter 10 (http://www.birdsofpreyonline.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2643)

ELEKTRA
03-31-2003, 02:14 PM
HI HI
:) I worte a new fanfic there is a poll on it i would love to get your
honest opinion its Called the story you never heard.
Thanks bi bi
it was great i loved it please check mine out
thank you

jaguarin
03-31-2003, 02:21 PM
BRAVO DELPHINIOS!!!, A VERY GOOD CHAPTER AGAIN, i love it!!!!

ShadowWalker
03-31-2003, 02:23 PM
OHHHHHHHHH Great delphi!!!! i'm so happy i'm jumping up and down in my chair

darkphoenix
03-31-2003, 02:23 PM
*sits wordless in awe in front of screen* OMG....wow.........ALL HAIL THE GREAT AND MIGHTY BARD!!!!!

ShadowWalker
03-31-2003, 02:25 PM
ALL HAIL DELPHI!!!

darkphoenix
03-31-2003, 02:31 PM
*cheers* ALL HAIL DELPHI ALL HAIL DELPHI ALL HAIL DELPHI ALL HAIL DELPHI ALL HAIL DELPHI ALL HAIL DELPHI!!!!!!! Now that I have finally regained the ability to speak....amazing chapter!!! Wow..you really did outdid yourself on this chapter :D Please keep up the good work! :D

MUZBNUTS
03-31-2003, 02:35 PM
OH MAN! That was the best chapter yet!! Great work with Dinah!! Absolutely loved it!!

huntress' prey
03-31-2003, 02:38 PM
WOW

great delphi, just great, i love the way everything is coming to where they belong. they 2 young girls are strong but they're nothing without the glue that holds them together, and that's Oracle.

really love this fanfic. please keep goin

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 02:58 PM
I'm home, sick, today, and your story saved my from the hell that is daytime television! Thank you! I don't need to tell you this is awesome, but I will, anyway!

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!

Oh, continue quick!!!

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 03:07 PM
I love you guys....but you're not getting my Bud Light....OR CHAPTER TEN until I'm ready.

Mwhaha....

( I think there are only going to be Twelve chapters to the story....so we're getting close to the end. But, don't worry...this is very likely going to be a trilogy. *EG*)

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 03:10 PM
Cool!

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 03:29 PM
LOL, not the reaction I expected. More torturing Babs...who would think she was my favorite character the way I put her thorugh Hell? <G> Anyway....the third takes place AFTER the finale...so quite a bit of time has passed. Have it partially planned out...but still doing the research.

Bethany

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 03:32 PM
Bethany, I will read anything you write with a big, stupid smile on my face. I am thrilled to hear that there will be more.

Thrilled, I tell you!

darkphoenix
03-31-2003, 03:43 PM
Yes. I too will read ANYTHING you post!

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 03:45 PM
You know she's probably going to post some absolutely horrid parody of a fanfic, just to make us eat our words!

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 03:52 PM
*Evil grin*

*winks at SGH* I think the time has arrived...don't you?

BlacCanary124
03-31-2003, 04:03 PM
*awes at the computer screen* Holy suspensful fanfic Batman! That was great Delphinos. But, is Babs gonna die? I mean, I can't let that happen to my favorite character!
Anyway,
Keep up the writing, Delphinos, I hope to find another chapter tomorrow.

yank2324
03-31-2003, 04:14 PM
Oh Wow Great chapter. Dinah was great. Can't wait for the next chapter. I think I hear the rattling of some Bud Light bottles.

huntress6541
03-31-2003, 04:20 PM
this story just keeps getting better, and better

Sxygrrl Huntress
03-31-2003, 04:21 PM
I heard I was being summoned.... A parody... sure...

I think they are in need of something. Why not end your story in a killer cliffhanger and leave them hanging for a while and offer them a comedy?

<G> I think she's rubbing off on me for sure! Mwaaa haaa haaaa!

BlacCanary124
03-31-2003, 04:26 PM
I like the way Dinah says she loves Babs. I mean, in the show they don't. But. I'm glad they do, another hint that they are actually becoming a family. they always seem to get into little arguments sometime.

Oracle'sProtege
03-31-2003, 04:53 PM
This is a great story. I really love this chapeter. Please post the next part soon.

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 04:55 PM
Me and my big mouth!

msugirl85
03-31-2003, 05:44 PM
sam, she's really tempting me to say the "butter" line. i know that's your line, but this is getting so good it might just accidently pop out.

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 06:28 PM
Shoot, MSU, I almost said it, myself!

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 06:29 PM
*clears throat* Please direct your attention to the Nerds of Prey story for the parody prompted by Sam's teasing.

Bethany

Silver Cougar
03-31-2003, 06:40 PM
since msu won't say it, I will:

Well butter my butt and call me a buscuit!

There, it's said. Now please stop torturing us!

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 06:49 PM
LOL. Sad, sad people. Ten'll be up when its up.

jaguarin
03-31-2003, 06:54 PM
Are you a nephew of Marquise De Sade ? :D

msugirl85
03-31-2003, 06:54 PM
:( you said it. that's my line...:(

jaguarin
03-31-2003, 06:55 PM
Oh.... sorry...

msugirl85
03-31-2003, 06:56 PM
not you. she knows who she is!!!!! line-stealer!!! :p

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 06:59 PM
I thought the Marquise De Sade wrote sex stories? *glares at the select few* Who told? Hm? Speak up and I'll sic Phil on you.

Bethany

SamIAm
03-31-2003, 07:02 PM
It's okay, MSU--she said it with a Canadian accent. You need that Southern drawl for the full effect.

msugirl85
03-31-2003, 07:03 PM
yeppers peppers.

jaguarin
03-31-2003, 07:03 PM
:D

Silver Cougar
03-31-2003, 09:01 PM
Now how do you know I've got a Canadian accent? Huh? I'm 1/3 Irish, 1/3 Welsh, 1/3 French Canadian, and I think there's a German great great uncle in there somewhere.

Now how do ye know I don't have an Irish accent?

Or a Welsh accent?

Or le accent francias?

;) My accent is my own, and...
That's all there is, there isn't, anymore. *Dum dum*

~~~Sorry, just ate dinner while I was charged with post-martial arts class adreneline; makes me kinda strange, as does everything anyway. (You see what I mean?)~~~

:D ;)

Edit: 555 posts, *smiles wickedly* I'm a catchin' up to you, msu!

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 09:33 PM
A Welsh accent? Love those. They're musical. My mother's BIG into our Welsh ancestry.

Silver Cougar
03-31-2003, 09:50 PM
Yeah, well, sorry, but I don't actually have one of those. I can be quite loud when I want to though ;) Plus this unfortunate habit of annoying people :angel:

Oh, oh, this is funny!
Today my sensei told me that a monkey grip is stronger (okay...), and he showed it to me. It's gripping without using your thumb on the other side, you know what I mean? So, I said, "Monkeys have prehensile thumbs... Monkeys don't grip like that because they can move their thumbs like humans can." Then my sensei said "Well, I didn't make up the names, it's just called that" (Or something to that extent)

Hee hee, it's sooooo fun being a smartass!

Gabsgrl
03-31-2003, 10:50 PM
Great chapter Del!!! I want to see my Barbara back! The REAL Barbara!! ::sniff sniff::

Delphinios
03-31-2003, 10:52 PM
*evil laughter* The thing you least expect will almost always happen in my stories. Just a warning.

Silver Cougar
04-01-2003, 12:01 AM
I have been warned! So... when's the next bit of unreliable unexpectedness coming out? Just an honest question...

Delphinios
04-01-2003, 12:04 AM
Sooon....very sooon. And the next story may get me hate mail.

Bethany

Silver Cougar
04-01-2003, 12:07 AM
What do you mean... oh, I'm afraid to ask! You are evil, you know that? Man, I'm evil's protege- what is the world coming to!

Delphinios
04-01-2003, 12:21 AM
LOL. I will only say this. What has happened to the Birds already will be NO match for what comes next.

Silver Cougar
04-01-2003, 12:32 AM
People will stop reading your stuff if you're too mean to the characters... me being at least one of the group I have stated as 'people' :smoke:

Thanatos
04-01-2003, 10:23 AM
Yeah, sure. And the US is going to get it's butt kicked in Iraq and have to be saved by Canada and France.

Do your worst, Delphinos.

darkphoenix
04-01-2003, 01:55 PM
Originally posted by Silver Cougar
People will stop reading your stuff if you're too mean to the characters... me being at least one of the group I have stated as 'people' :smoke:

I don't care what you do to your characters....I am hooked on your stories and will NEVER stop reading them!!! :D Yes Dephinios...(to quote Thantos) do your worst.....

Starkat
04-01-2003, 02:43 PM
I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't turture us much longer!!(though, ya know, the torture is half the fun :D ) Your stories feed my soul and inspire my brain!!!

huntress6541
04-01-2003, 09:10 PM
Just had to read it again, a superb piece of fine work.

Silver Cougar
04-01-2003, 09:15 PM
Originally posted by Thanatos
Yeah, sure. And the US is going to get it's butt kicked in Iraq and have to be saved by Canada and France.

Do your worst, Delphinos. Nah, not quite. We'll let the Americans get out of their own pickle, should anyone break out the canning jars :p We're the clean-up crew, remember? Helping people rebuild after the war...

Delphinios
04-01-2003, 10:46 PM
LOL. *Pulls out her cross-stitch needle to pop something.* K, better now. Chapter Ten should be up tomorrow...and from there, the story is totally written. <G> I do love torturing you guys.

Bethany

Thanatos
04-01-2003, 11:20 PM
Does that make me a masochist? Cause you've been doing this to me for what? 2 years?

Delphinios
04-02-2003, 01:16 PM
As promised, Chapter Ten is up.

Only two more to go.

Fasten your seat belts, folks. This is going to be a bumpy ride.

Gabsgrl
04-02-2003, 02:09 PM
Keep it up Del! I love your stuff!

Thanatos
04-02-2003, 02:49 PM
Bring on the pain!