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[Silver_Flame]

Hey guys.
I've finished my first BoP story in fanfiction.net and I hope you'll read it and like it, and not flame the ending like Scrapnel, who totally dissed it. Here's the link:
My Story: Stolen Shadows (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1041437)

[SamIAm]

Say, I read that story, but by the time I saw it, you'd changed the ending. What happened in the original that was so awful? Inquiring minds want to know. From your comments, I inferred that you liked the original ending better. Also, you had left it as though it wasn't quite an end. I was hoping you'd continue the story on further. You might even want to consider at some point going back and filling in more details in the middle or something. Just a thought. Anyway, I liked it. Don't take Scrapnel to heart. It's hard to put your writing out there--at least, it is for me...so much of my heart and soul goes into it. Don't stop writing!

[jaguarin]

I'm agree will be better your story with more details... how Helena kill the bad boy?... ¡Congratulations!

[Candle]

Back to you soon as I read it! :-D

[darkphoenix]

Nice story I like it:D Hope you write more!

[huntress6541]

I just read it, and I thought it was fantastic. I only found one chapter, was it just the one or more? anyway the chapter I found was great.