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Larry
12-01-2002, 04:36 PM
It's a short story I tried to put together a while back based on BOP. Well, as much as I tried to base on it, anyway. It's not the best piece of writing I've done, it was done kind of in haste but at least it'll give you all a chance to see what I can do.

I'm still learning and I know I have a long way to go before my writing will be at a level where I'll be truly satisfied with it and can be readable for the public. All I can say is that I'm displaying it out for everyone to see. Good or bad, it's what it is. Nothing more and nothing less. By the way, it's incomplete, too. :D

You can find the story at:

http://personal.nbnet.nb.ca/authorx1/incomplete.html

Let me know what you think of it.
DarkHuntress
12-01-2002, 04:45 PM
It's good! You need to finish it! I know how it is to write a story off of a tv show, I've been working on a BoP story myself, but it's nowhere near finished!

Good Luck with the story, and write more soon!
Neptune's Rose
12-02-2002, 09:11 PM
I agree!! Larry did you finish the second part yet? I need to read it ;) Good work on the story I am hooked!!
Larry
12-03-2002, 10:08 AM
Well, I guess this gives me a new incentive to finish the story. Thanks for your comments, folks. They were needed because I didn't feel very confident about my writing but now I know it can be looked at and liked.
It's appreciated. :)
DarkHuntress
12-03-2002, 10:11 AM
Your welcome! write more soon!
Plebb Master
12-05-2002, 08:06 AM
Have you thought about putting your story up on fanfiction.net? There's quite a few fic's up under the Birds Of Prey category, and you would get good feedback from other BOP authors.

That's unless you're already there, obviously! lol
DarkHuntress
12-05-2002, 10:37 AM
I have an author name at ff.net, everyone there is usually pretty cool, I forgot about it actually.
Frostbite
12-05-2002, 02:41 PM
The people on fanfiction.net are mean! They all say things like "That doesn't make any sense." or "That story was incoherent." or "You're using too much 60's slang and detracting from the real meaning of the story. Get a life, you hippie."
DarkHuntress
12-09-2002, 10:33 AM
Frostbite, I never run into problems, but I never diss a person's story either..if I didn't like, I don't review, but that's just me!