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Queen of the C.Underworld
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Say My Name- Song Tribute to Reese and Helena by Catwoman
This song is about Reese and Helena and how they are in the beginning, present, and possible future. It's in Helena's POV (It's always easier in Helena's POV). I might do one in Reese's POV.
*Note: I barely do anything revolving around the last eppies so he doesn't know her yet. I thought of this song in the morinning on the way to school and wrote it in school. I hope everyone likes it. Plz give me review and feed back. Tell me if it's corny or wack. I am planning on actually turning it into a song, my friends are going to compose it. It's going to be a rock type of song, kinda altenative. A mixture of lagato then stacato. Say My Name- by XCatwomanX Verse 1: You don’t know me- no one does It’s not you- it’s what I’ve done Open your eyes to what I’ve implied I want you at my side but I’ve got to hide Trust is frail but only together we will prevail Our roles are hard to control- fighting this corrupted world Sometimes you just have to let go, make the leap, and believe Though when I’m around you I contemplate this game- my heart is screaming Chorus 1: Say my name! I want to see it roll off you tongue, like the sun emerging from the dark Say my name! I want to hear it calm and complete, with the beating of your teeth Say my name! To commemorate this day, and soon we will be free, in tears of eternity Verse 2: You want to know me- everyone does It’s me- it’s what I’ve become Don’t you see that you’re here with me? I confide in you but I’ve got to lie The path we chose might be victorious or backfire You ask me why veil what’s inside- it’s because that’s what I thrive Sometimes you just have to let go, make the leap, and believe Though when I’m around you I contemplate this game- my heart is crying Chorus 1: Say my name! I want to see it roll off you tongue, like the sun emerging from the dark Say my name! I want to hear it calm and complete, with the beating of your teeth Say my name! To commemorate this day, and soon we will be free, in tears of eternity Verse 3: I know you- that’s enough Now I run to what’s been done Why couldn’t I see what was meant to be? We stayed for the long run until your body is dull The past that lead us here is what I’ve always feared I should have made the leap, let go and believe Now I contemplate this game- my heart is calling out Chorus 2: Say my name! Before your mortal soul sets as the dawn begins to break Say my name! Before you’re engulfed by perpetual sleep- seeing those lively eyes surrender to obscurity Say my name! To commemorate this day, and soon we will be free, in tears of eternity Bridge: You’re in my arms- gazing upon this mess Why did I underestimate the way you transcend? Now I want you to know who I am- I want what I can’t have I should have told you- we should have made the leap, let go, and believe- my heart is crying Chorus 2: Say my name! Before your mortal soul sets as the dawn begins to break Say my name! Before you’re engulfed by perpetual sleep- seeing those lively eyes surrender to obscurity Say my name! To commemorate this day, and soon we will be free, in tears of eternity Chorus: (Say my name!) I want to see it roll off you tongue, like the sun emerging from the dark (Say my name!) I want to hear it calm and complete, with the beating of your teeth Say my name! (Say my name!) Before your mortal soul sets as the dawn begins to break (Say my name!) Before you’re engulfed by perpetual sleep- seeing those lively eyes surrender to obscurity (Say my name!) To commemorate this day, and soon we will be free, in tears of eternity  PLZ! give me some! But don't tell me "good" "great" "bad" "wack", but like a real review. Thanks for checking it out!Catwoman out!  |
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11-10-2003, 11:17 PM
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Professionally Paid Geek
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WOW! Cat, that was really great! Your words are amazing! I love the chorus too!!!
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11-10-2003, 11:45 PM
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GOOD JOB! NIcely done and jeeez if your going to get violent warn me so i can hide behind shan FINE dang it and hey your a cat what dog house!
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11-11-2003, 01:38 PM
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overwhelmed, but happy!
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Really good Cat!
 I especially like the way you did the last line of every verse. |
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11-11-2003, 03:02 PM
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Queen of the C.Underworld
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I feel like tieing you all to a chair and beating you over the head with a bat!
Catwoman out! |
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11-11-2003, 03:56 PM
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Very nice job...but if you hit everyone use my shovel instead *hands Cat shovel* I can honestly say I love it as much as I did the first time I read it. Your words were beautiful and the song over all was great. I thought that the verses just screamed Helena, they really went deep into her feelings. I thought the choruses (however you spell that) were very descriptive and heartfelt. My favorite verse was Verse 2, it really spoke to me with the words and how the lines were arranged. I think that the song will sound really good when performed in my opinion everything you just wrote was basically everything a song should have.
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11-11-2003, 06:05 PM
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Queen of the C.Underworld
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Peaches: thanks for the review, it was somewat a review and glad you decided to change it. As for everyone else, your in the doghouse.
Catwoman out! Last edited by XCatwomanX : 11-11-2003 at 06:17 PM. |
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11-11-2003, 06:08 PM
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Cat, Verses 2 & 3 are definitely my favorites. I like how you used elements from the show to explain what Helena was feeling and what was going on around her. The words and flow of the song are excellent. It was like reading a story...wait, a song IS a story...so, yeah.
 Great song, Cat! Wish I could hear it! Now, please don't hit me over the head with Peaches's shovel!!!! |
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11-13-2003, 12:11 AM
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Queen of the C.Underworld
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Thanks for the review! I'm not gonna hit you. You understand the neccessity of reviews and what to put. I know it's difficult to get out of the habit of 'great job' and 'can't wait for more' but really, ppl look inside of you and brak it down. It might take awhile but you will be helping others and yourself.
Catwoman out! |
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11-13-2003, 12:21 AM
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Cat, I really liked this song!! All your songs are amazing btw! I really liked the choruses. They showed a lot of emotion. I especially liked this line:
To commemorate this day, and soon we will be free, in tears of eternity Awesome job! . |
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11-16-2003, 03:19 AM
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Queen of the C.Underworld
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Thanks RG! Glad you took the time to read and review. Apperciate you like that line. But I'm not sure if ppl understand that line. Do you?
Catwoman out! |
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11-16-2003, 03:23 AM
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^ I think I get it but I might be wrong here. lol. Does it mean that if he says her name then on that day they will be together in eternity in tears of happiness?
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11-16-2003, 03:29 AM
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Queen of the C.Underworld
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YES! Cool you got it! I didn't think you would.... wow your smart! Round of appluase for RG!
 ~claps~ Anyother lines you want to translate? Or is it pretty straight forward... I think it is. Catwoman out! |
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11-16-2003, 03:36 AM
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